Honest feedback always welcome

Updated: Mar 24

Please tell me that you hate it

I don't want you to lie

I need you to be honest

I promise I won't cry.

The only thing I'm asking

is that you tell me why.


Tell me the whole things rubbish

That it fills you with dread

Tell me it's the worst thing

that you have ever read

If that's the best that I can do

I should go back to bed


I want people to be honest

so please don't walk away

I know I'm a useless critic

but I want you to have your say

All that silence tells me

is my poem is not ok

I really want to learn here

but I need some help from you

I will never get better

if I don't know what to do

Sometimes to be honest

I haven't got a clue


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